Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Academy #3 The Troiku, a new kind of haiku-ing

Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

Recently I started this new "branch" of the Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Family and I love how this new "branch" already find its way to the visitors. Here at the CDHK Academy I will gather the educational posts which I published earlier on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, a daily haiku meme.

This new post is about Troiku, its a new way of creating haiku and I (Chèvrefeuille) have created / invented it myself. So here is more about Troiku.

TROIKU, a new form of haiku

I love to introduce to you a new haiku form invented / created by your host Chèvrefeuille, the Troiku and I think it's fun, but not an easy form. First I have to tell you something about the source of the name Troiku.

It goes back to 17th century Russia.

A troika (meaning: triplet or trio, as shown above) is a traditional Russian harness driving combination, using three horses abreast, usually pulling a sleigh. It differs from most other three horse combinations in that the horses are harnessed abreast. The middle horse is usually harnessed in a horse collar and shaft bow; the side horses are usually in breast collar harness. The troika is traditionally driven so that the middle horse trots and the side horses canter; the right hand horse will be on the right lead and the left hand horse on the left lead.

The troika was developed in Russia during the 17th century and could reach on full-speed 45-50 kilometers per hour, which was at that time a very high speed on land for vehicles.

OK ... up to the Troiku. Compared with the troika, haiku counts three lines and the troika was driven by three horses. A troika was (mostly) a sleigh and that ... my dear haijin, visitors and travelers is what a troika made a troika.

In the Troiku, the sleigh is the base haiku from which we will start.

E.g. the 'sleigh' of our Troiku is a haiku written by a classical (or modern) haiku poet.

For the introduction of the Troiku I have chosen a haiku by Basho. A very well-known one written by him ... namely 'frog pond'.

furu ike ya   kawazu tobikomu   mizo no oto

old pond
frog jumps in
sound of water

In this Troiku form it's the intention to write three new haiku (the horses of the troika) starting with the separated lines of the 'sleigh'.

In this example you have to write a new haiku with 'old pond', 'frog jumps in' and 'sound of water'. Let's give it a try heh ...

The 'sleigh':

old pond
frog jumps in
sound of water

The horses:

Horse one:

old pond -
the scent of the Lotus
overwhelms me

Horse two:

frog jumps in
the sound of rain far away
thunder and lightning

Horse three:

sound of water
dripping from the gutter
after the hurricane

Nice way of writing haiku isn't it. I love it. I hope you, my dear haijin, do like this new Troiku too. Let's do another one. This time I will use a haiku written by myself. This haiku I published on Carpe Diem on November 5^th, 2012.

The Sleigh:

all day sunrise
what a joy to live in
my orange house

The horses:

Horse  one:

all day sunrise
Mother Nature is confused
the longest day

Horse two:

what a joy to live in
a world full of fantasy
patches of clouds

Horse three:

my orange house
save harbor for my children
till when will it last?

© Chèvrefeuille

It's really a nice way to be creative with that wonderful ancient / classical Japanese poetry form, haiku. A real challenge too I think. Of course in this form you cannot follow the classical rules, because it's more a "free-style" way of haiku crafting.

Namasté

Chèvrefeuille

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Academy #2 What is haiku?

Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

At Carpe Diem Haiku Kai I published several lectures on haiku and renga, here is one of those lectures.

What is haiku?

Prelude:

Haiku is, what we call, the shortest poem on the world. It's an original Japanese poem. Haiku as we know it now has its roots in the Renga. A Renga was a game of poetry and it was a 'hit' at the Emperor's Court. Renga, also called Renku, Bound Verse or Linked Poem, was a 'game' in which (mainly) poets wrote long chains of poems.

Renga started with a 'hokku' (starting verse) and had also strict rules, but that's maybe something for another 'lecture'. The hokku was a three lined verse with 5-7-5 syllables (or characters) and it mostly was a verse that had a double meaning. So with the starting verse the Renga could go in two ways.

The game of Renga was to write hai ('question') and kai ('answer') in turns. Sometimes a Renga was played with big groups of poets and could end up with one hundred or more 'links'.

The intention was to associate on the verse given by the one before you and write a new 'link' to the verse.

Haiku's roots:

As you have read above the Renga started with a 'hokku'. That 'hokku' became in the 17th century haiku. However haiku got his name in the end of the 19th century. It was Shiki (1867-1902) (one of the five greatest haiku poets and - masters) who gave haiku its name.

Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), the most famous haiku poet ever

Basho (1644-1694) took the 'hokku' out of Renga and made it an independent poem. He kept the syllable count (5-7-5) and started to write 'haikai' e.g.

old pond
a frog jumps in
sound of water

This 'haikai' is the most famous haiku by Basho and he wrote it when he lived in Edo (now Tokyo). It's a masterpiece. I have once written a set of new haiku for Wonder Haiku Worlds  an International website.

Haiku rules:

Haiku has several rules, to many to speak about here, but I will give you, dear reader, the most important rules for haiku:

1.The syllable count: 5-7-5

This is the most important rule and this is what makes haiku a haiku.

2.The inspiration source: A haiku is inspired by a short moment. This short moment is as short as the sound of a pebble thrown in water. Say 'one heart beat' short. (You can say haiku is a 'aha-erlebnis').

3.The seasonword (kigo)

To place the haiku in a specific season the classical Japanese poets used 'kigo' or seasonwords. These are words that refer to a season e.g. tulips (Spring); sunbathing (Summer), colored leaves (Autumn) and snow (Winter).

4.Interchanging

This I have to explain I think. Interchanging means that the first and third sentence of the haiku are interchangeable without losing the imagery of the haiku e.g.

a lonely flower
my companion for one night -
the indigo sky

When I 'interchange' the first and third sentence:

the indigo sky -

my companion for one night
a lonely flower

Through interchanging the both sentences the image of the haiku didn't change.

5.Cutting word (kireji): The so called 'cutting word' or 'kireji' was mostly a '-' as I have used in the above given haiku and it means 'here ends the line' or 'a break in the line'. The '-' may be counted as a syllable.

6.Deeper Meaning: Every haiku (the most haiku) have a deeper meaning. This deeper meaning is mostly a Zen-Buddhistic meaning, because haiku has originated from Zen-Buddhism, but it could also be a deeper meaning based on the philosophy of the haiku poet. The deeper meaning is mostly a spiritual one.

Writing haiku is fun you can asked that at millions of haiku poets all over the world. You have to try it ... and I think that if you start to write haiku you will become an addict of it.

Well ... this was a short Carpe Diem Lecture, but I hope I was clear enough to let you see what haiku is.

For closure a haiku:

the fence looks bright
in the early hazy sunlight -
crystal cobweb

© Chèvrefeuille

Well ... I think you have learned a little bit more about haiku and maybe it inspired you to try it yourself.

Namastè,

Chévrefeuille