Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
I love to introduce Tan Renga, the short chained renga, to you.
Tan Renga
the short linked chain of two stanza
Maybe you
know the Tanka that poem with 5 lines following the syllables count 5-7-5-7-7,
A beautiful Japanese poetry form which I just started recently to create. The
Tanka is a poem written by one poet and that's the difference with the Tan
Renga.
The Tan
Renga has also 5 lines following the same syllables count as the Tanka, but the
Tan Renga is written by two poets. One poet writes the first stanza of three
(3) lines in the following example that will be Jane Reichhold:
Here is the
first stanza of this example Tan Renga:
morning sun
the twinkle of stars
still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)
the twinkle of stars
still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)
The goal
for the second poet is create the second stanza of two (2) lines through
association on the first stanza (as we do in a renga). For this example I have
written the second stanza:
her bright
shining eyes
she unpacks her new doll (your host)
she unpacks her new doll (your host)
This is
what you call a Tan Renga. It's possible to leave a blanc line between the two
stanzas, but you can also make it unite with each other as I do mostly. Than
this is the result:
morning sun
the twinkle of stars
still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)
the twinkle of stars
still in the dew (Jane Reichhold)
her bright
shining eyes
she unpacks her new doll (your host)
she unpacks her new doll (your host)
It’s a nice
way to discover the beauty of haiku. And it turns haiku writing into a nice way
to work with other people.
Here you can read an E-book with Tan Renga written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, the daily haiku meme.
Namaste,
Chèvrefeuille
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